Written by wordinityFebruary 25, 2017 Haiku – Water Tears oh showered from above Cloudy skies glistening rain of thundering joy A drop touched my eye. #introtopoetry Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 6 thoughts on “Haiku – Water” Dont take it as otherwise but this is not Haiku…good try I will say… LikeLiked by 1 person Reply So tell me the specifics of haiku then. For all i knew is that haiku is a three lined poem mostly based on nature where there are no rhymes and the first and last line is of five words, the middle-seven. So i would be glad if you can correct me in any way ☺ LikeLike Reply Yes its 3 line but not words but syllable…theres an article I had wrote to help others on Haiku…you can find it in Lets Talk… section of my blog…read it & your doubts will get clear… LikeLiked by 1 person Oh okie..I surely will. Thanks. LikeLiked by 1 person While this is not Haiku, I loved the imagery of this poem. -simply beautiful! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Yeah me being naive, used 5-7-5 word structure rather than syllabic! Now I have mend those LikeLike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email.